The End Of Time
He's Here
Chapter Forty-One
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I had bought tickets to the first five shows.
If I didn't get her and the little girl by then, then obviously I was doing something
wrong.
Seeing all these kids come to see her was outrageous.
Brooklyn's performance was amazing though, she screamed and sang.
But then that stupid boyfriend of her's came out during her set and sang with her.
Of course they kissed too!
She was just making me angrier.
After about an hour she came back out and sang with him and his band.
I have to admit although I didn't like her with him, they sand great together.
After they finished I saw her and she made eye contact with me.
Notes
This was weird to write but thought you should get this his view. Leave some feed
back on when you think he will get Brooklyn or will he not?
I think I'd rather have you finish "It's not over till it's over" (because you've already started writing a sequel and I really want to see how they'll manage with Brooklyn's memory loss) but I also love "The end of time" a lot.
So anyway I hope you'll keep writing at least one of these stories because you're a very good writer :)
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