This Love Is Sempiternal - Comments, page 4

THAT FUCKING BASTARD OH MY FUCKING GOD I'M IN CLASS READING THIS AND I BROKE DOWN INN TEARS WHY DID HE HAVE TO TAKE HER< AND YES YOU ARE RIGHT I DO HATE HIM MORE THAN I HATED MATT IN THE OTHER STORY, LIKE HOW ARE YOU GONNA TAKE THE BABY OH MY GO DI HOPE DANI WILL BE ALRIGHT. I AM BEGGING YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HAVE HIM DIE SOME TERRIBLE WAY. LIKE THIS IS REALLY HURTING ME KNOW THAT HE IS ALIVE

OH MY GOD! NO! NO! NO! NOOOO! DANI BETTER BE OK AND EVERYONE ELSE INVOLVED OR HELL IS BREAKING LOOSE!
*heart breaking* *crying uncontrollably* *whispers quietly 'update, update' repeatedly*

Oh my god ! No.. No .. No ! Cass needs to be ok and so does Austin ! And someone has to kill Vince for taking Dani ! Please update I can't take all this uncertainty

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *adds a million Os more*
*starts crying* *falls on my knees* *falls sideways* *sobs*
WHYWHWYWHY
YOU'RE CRUEL
WHY?!

UPDATE. NOW.

@Audrie
Awww. You'll find out soon! I'll be updating tomorrow

@lemongirl1
Lol I'm guessing you hate him more than you hated Matt in the last story?

@therandomgirlontheinternet
That means so much to me. Thankyou for saying that. I actually feel bad for taking up three days of your life. But I'm glad my writing has done such great things.

@Dead-And-Forgotten-Memories
Lol (;

CHER WHYYYYYYYYYYY

in the past 3 days ive read the fist book and all of this one i cant wait till you post another chapter best book ive read in a really long time i cant even find a good book on wattpad then i came accrosse thes website and i feel in love with your book keep up the good work really good book.

GOD DAMN IT VINNY YOU NEED TO HURRY UP AND DIE, IT COULD ONLY BE YOU TO SUDDENLY POP OUT OF NOWHERE AND CRASH INTO CASSANDRA'S CAR.... this guy either needs to die some horrible death or never ever come back because i know he has something to do with this

OMG what happened to Cassandra ?! I was happy when I read "the next chapter will be got you Carlile lovers" since I'm one of them but now... I'm worried ^^

@LiveItUp
I think that, to fuck our minds, he'll only remember until Arlet and him were together, so he won't remember they broke up and drama will get out of control (even more than now)

@LiveItUp
I think that, to fuck our minds, he'll only remember until Arlet and him were together, so he won't remember they broke up and drama will get out of control (even more than now)

*chases after you* WAIT! COME BACK AND FIX THIS!!!!
*crying* my feels.. No... ;;-;;

Ugh the drama!!!!!
Damn youre a good writer though!

I think oli is going to hit his head really bad but not too bad just enough to knock him out and then while unconscious remember everything! Please update soon (:

HOLY SHIT OLI BE CAREFUL

OLI YOU FUCKNUT

uh oh oli's remembering stuff

Finally cought up! love it please update soon!

Update please please i love it so much! >_< <3<3<3