Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now. - Comments, page 4

Holy shit where has this story been hiding well time to kick up my feet and flip on the radio and flip off the world in my room

Nuuuuuuu

OMFG THIS IS JUST. LIKE. ERMAHGERD.

Please update soon. You can't just leave us with a bloody cliffhanger. ;~; It's a great story and I just get lost in it.

Update please!!

@TheBandWriter
Yeah I will from now, Sorry I hadn't for a while, I was going through a bit of a tough time, but all is well :P

Update again please?

loving this story update soon

He's changed so much towards her- not at all like the beginning.. His character doesn't seem constant which is both a good and a bad thing.. I'm enjoying the story either way though. Update soon please!!

I don't even know whats gotten into Oli?

Poor sickly Oli!!!

Awww poor Oli :(

And like, when she leaves... they lose touch.. she spirals into depression and all of that and Oli sort of realises that all along he did care about her and again, back to my first comment about the soul-collecting, he finds her; maybe this time she chooses to jump off a bridge or something, which could work; she jumps just as Oli reaches her and pleads for her not to jump. In a state of panic, he acts on the first thought in his head: jump. So he climbs over the railing and poof, jumps too. He has to swim down to get her weak body and manages to swim her to safety. But did she make it? thats up to you. I don't know, it's your story but this could work- if you don't use it, I will! :P :P hahaha

@xInfinite_Dreamerx
Oh yay :') Cause like.. yeah.. !!!

@TheBandWriter
Wow.. that is a really good damn point, i think I might use that :P

I kinda hoped that Rain would get the message he wants nothing to do with her then leave.. When she's close to suicide again and about to die, Oli is called to collect his next soul (which is hers) and he doesn't know it yet- he only has the address he's supposed to go. When he sees it's her, he freaks out and tries everything ti save her.. then he rediscovers his love for her.. Just an idea :/

It's kinda sad that she died. But I think Rain and Oli should get back together. She can help him with the baby, I think that's just what she needs to get her on track and sane.

TODAY IN SCHOOL I WAS THINKING "WHAT IF SJ DIED?" AND IT HAPPENED. Oh my god. I LOVE IT
Great fanfic like omfg <3

I love it! I just really want Rain and Oli back together, she changed him. He acted differently when he was with her. Sj's cool, but I ship Roli :3 lel.

@Day_Dreamer

Aha, thanks! I'm updating it today probably, thanks for telling me to update! It started to not get as many views and comments! :O