Repeating Apologies - Comments

@beyond the horizon
You do?!

i do!

@BANDSnSHIT
Mkay c:

Have more explaining in it. Like put in more details. I know when ever I write my story it is easier to get your point across and a lot easier to write when you put every thing in detail. But it is just a tip. You don't have to do it. Either way your story is AAAHHHMMMAAZZZING! Lmao. :)

@BANDSnSHIT

go ahead

@Holisaurus
Hell yeah it is! But do you mind if I give you a little constructive criticism? It is nothing bad I promise! Only a little pointer to help you enjoy it more! :D

@Holisaurus
Hell yeah it is! But do you mind if I give you a little constructive criticism? It is nothing bad I promise! Only a little pointer to help you enjoy it more! :D

@BANDSnSHIT

it is?

Eek!!! This is so goody!! :D

@BANDSnSHIT
lol

I really hope that shea chooses Austin! Just sayin! Lol

@BANDSnSHIT

Lol, otay!

@Holisaurus
Yay! Can't wait!

@BANDSnSHIT

yes! Omg that's perf!

@Holisaurus
Yes! Have it to where Austin decides not to wait for Shea so he left on his own. And Shea decided to go look for him and finds him partially dead.

@BANDSnSHIT

Alright, I won't. But should I have Austin get into an accident? Or should the car swerve away?

Well it doesn't. Your story is just starting out. It is going to take a little while for it to get good. At least write a few more chapters then if you still feel like it sucks then you can stop. But don't give up at the beginning when it is just getting good! :)

@BANDSnSHIT

I just feel like it does...

Omg!! This story does not suck!! Please continue it!!!