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Losing Fate.

Losing Fate.

Looking down at my Sneakers as Fall Out Boy Blasts Through my Headphones, I Feel someone Tap me on the Shoulder. I Look over to see my Mom Staring at me. “What do you want” I Sigh, Pulling out my headphones. “I’m Just Reminding you, to Get Changed soon. So you Aren’t Late for the Concert your going to” She Smiles. I Nod my Head and Stand up from the Couch. Heading up Stairs to my Bedroom, my Pug’s Dean Winchester and Ron Wesley Follow Behind me. Walking into my Room, I Close the Door Locking them on the outside whilst I get changed. Putting on My Beauty and the Beast Tie Dye Shirt and Black Skinny Jeans, I Hear a knock on my bedroom door. “Ron and Dean Stop it” I Sigh. “It’s me, Your Boyfriend. Your Dogs are downstairs” Derrick Laughs. I Freeze up on the Stop. “d….Derrick, I Broke up with you 3 weeks ago” I Tremble. I Hear my bedroom door open to see my Best Friend Michael and His Boyfriend Tate Standing Before me. “You Fucking Assholes” I Screech throwing my sneakers at them. “Hey, Marianne We Couldn’t Help it. You Had your Mind Set on The Of Mice & Men, Pierce the Veil, Bring me the Horizon and All Time Low Concert all Day, We just wanted to have a little bit of fun” Tate Laughs.

“It’s Not Fun, When you know Derrick used to attack me when I didn’t do what I was Told” I Huff, Fixing up my Wavy Sea Salt, Brown Hair. Slipping on my Sneakers, I Grab my Star wars Wallet and Head Downstairs following Michael and Tate. “Bye Mom” I Smile, Heading out the door. Getting into Tate’s Car, He Puts the Keys into ignition as a Vocaloid Starts to Play. “I see Your into Hatsune Miku again” I Laugh, Changing the Cd over to Dirty Work by All Time Low. Arriving at The Venue, I Realise that I Had Left my Phone at Home. “Hey Guys. I Kinda maybe left my Phone at Home” I Sigh. “Here Have mine” Michael Smiles, Handing his Phone to me. As we Walk into the Venue, I Have this weird feeling as If I’m Being Watched I Don’t Know why I Just do. I Try to ignore this Feeling by Focusing on Bring me The Horizon Who are about to Start Playing. Alligator Blood Starts to Play and as I Jump around with the sea of strangers, I Feel as we All Know each other because we all have one thing in common and That is our Fantastic Taste in Music.

As the Hours Passed, Pierce the Veil, All Time Low and Bring me The Horizon had Finished their Sets. Standing there, I Realise that I Had lost Michael and Tate. I Pull out the Phone to see That I Have a Text. “Mind Catching a Taxi home, Michael Threw up everywhere”. I Roll my Eyes and Text Back. “Ok Cool. I’ll Try get a taxi”. As Of Mice & Men walk upon the stage, I Look up at my Hero Austin Carlile as He Introduces the Band. The Flood Starts to Play after That. I Finally Get up to the Barricades and Start Singing along with the sea of Strangers. Looking over to my Left, I see a Very Familiar Person Standing Next to me. “Derrick” I Think to myself. Backing away, I Make my Way to the Back of the room. I had suddenly Realise why, I Felt Like I was Being Watched. Walking out of the Venue as When You Can’t Sleep at Night Starts to Play, I Sit Down underneath he bus Shelter. Trying to Pick up a Signal so I Can Call Tate to Come Pick me up, I Hear People Walking out of the Venue. “Better Hide” I think to Myself. Sitting There, Still trying to get a Phone Signal I Have a hissy fit and throw Michael’s phone across the Road. “Stupid piece of shit” I Whisper to myself.
“Hey There, Marianne” I Here Derrick the Filthy Mutt Call out to me. I Stand up From my Seat and Try to run away towards the Venue Building. Derrick Chases after Me and Pushes me up against the Brick Wall. “Help” I Screech, as I fall to the cold hard gravel. I Feel something Cold run down my Cheek. “Blood” I Think to myself . “So How have you been. Fucked any guys Lately” Derrick Huffs. I Ignore him and Try Kick him away as He Keep undoing my belt. “No One Going to Find me” I Think to Myself. I Feel Derrick punch me in the face, “Why aren’t you answering me, You Slut”. “Because you’re a cunt” I Cry out to the neighbour hood. “What’s Going on Here” I Hear a Voice Call Out. My Vision Starts to Fade a Little but I Hear Fists against Skin and Footsteps running away. “Derrick was too much for them to handle” I Think to myself. I see a Dark shadow look over at me, Just as a dim light hits this dark shadow I see Austin Carlile looking down at me just as I Pass out.

Notes

So my First Fanfic. Tell me what you think?

Comments

@Paige-loves_rock
Why Thank you. I am nearly done the 2nd chapter.
Austin-Bears Austin-Bears
10/24/13
Please update this is great
Paige-loves_rock Paige-loves_rock
10/24/13
@hessian777
Thanks. I'll be updating in a few hours. Im working on the 2nd chapter now
Austin-Bears Austin-Bears
10/23/13
It's great please update
hessian777 hessian777
10/23/13