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The Last Snow: A Mother's Love - Comments

Fuck...... ahm my username on wattpad is @Happily.Motionless

@Motionless.Rinio
It still won't let me on :( Keeps saying the domain isn't there

HI THEY FIXED IT IM TALKING FROM IT NOW!!!!!!!!

@xXStalkerXx
Hi! Oh my gosh am I happy to hear from you. I can't get to it either, I think that website is done for :(
Makes me so damn sad.
I actually ended up moving my stories to Wattpad. If this PTV one stays up I'll keep updating here, but if not I'll have everything on Wattpad!

Hi this ia motionless rinio i cannot access to the domain of motionless in white and im sorry that im posting from here but please be careful i feel like they deleted the minisite

Awwwwwww ! Hey girl I just want you to know that you are one of my favorite writers hrere..... Just so you know... Now I'm gonna go update my story and go to sleep xD

@Motionless.Rinio
Thank you so much! I promise I won't make you wait too too long for that!

@WednesdaysCoffin
That's what I was hoping- that by waiting it would carry more significance and emotion for Bella, especially with Tyler. I'm also having a tough time being patient to write something like a Bella, Chris, and Tyler scene!

Its funny that you like the chapter where Chris takes Bella's virginity, because when I look back I feel like it wasn't written well, and didn't convey the mood like I had wanted, but I am glad that you were able to enjoy it! Perhaps I was just too rough on myself with that one.

Not pathetic at all, mot one bit! My mind was in the gutter when I wrote that, so I didn't even consider Chris's name being an option.
I did see TJ and his post, and I have to agree with you on that. The man looked good, haha.

Lastly, you're absolutely right about Rickys hair- it's beyond fabulous!
Thank you again for such kind comments :D

Okay, so the first thing is the major/obvious fact that Bella requests to wait 2 weeks for sex on Tyler’s birthday. Which I think is cute/sweet and will make the sex even more special. Of course, I was hoping to read a Tyler/Bella/Chris threesome soon, but oh well. My dirty mind can be patient…maybe. Lol

Nextly, I love the scene of Bella and Chris waking up together. I like that Bella is hesitant, yet she’s growing in her confidence and level of comfort. Also, Bella saying that Chris is “good with his hands” turned my mind to Jello. :p Job well-done! It did not help that this was followed by Bella gently gyrating atop his crotch. (I just misspelled half the sentence while trying to type, so clearly even on the second reading this turns my mind to soup!)

However, I like that Bella stood her ground and reminded Chris that, though he’s been patient and loving now, he wasn’t always that way in the past. I’m going to admit, that old chapter when Chris took her virginity is still one of my favorites. I know, I know, I’m sadistic but there it is.

Oh, and when Bella said “the C word,” I immediately thought “Chris”. How pathetic am I?

As for all this speak of TJ . . . Did you see the IG story he posted today? He looked good. It kills me to say that, but the guy looked pretty damn good. Maybe Bella and I are growing more accustomed to him together? (Although I liked the gentle diss of “TJ might not have said something stupid for once”.) Maybe on his 2 nights in the basement with Bella, he can convince both Bella and I that he’s worth it?

Oh, and I loved that Ghost got a little cameo time and love in this chapter. I miss that dirty boy!

Lastly, I’m sorry, but if we’re talking great hair, we need to talk Ricky. That guy has beautiful, flowing locks!

@BlackVeilsinWhite
I love innuendos, so I am all about it! :) As for the dynamic between Tyler, Chris and Bella, I really enjoy it. I feel like the boys taking cues from one another is boosting their relationships with Bella who, in turn, is boosted in her self-confidence when they act accordingly. It's a great give-and-take dynamic.

Now that said, I actually FINALLY received a notification for the new update last night, but I had too long of a day to be able to read and comment. I was so excited that I read the update, but I was just too brain-fried to comment. So I'm going to go back and craft a semi-intelligent response now. :D

Awwwwww such a great chapter yet again! Amazing and beautifully .... hot.... well
... the thought of an possible orgy in two weeks time( story wise) is an amaxing feeling to have

@WednesdaysCoffin
It is absolutely not wrong of you to think of that ass comment by Chris as extra dirty - it was written to have that innuendo in it. It is for sure that there will be many nice massages...all over in chapters to come!
When it comes to Tyler and Chris, the reason Bella seems to 'love' them both, is that she obviously loves and values the actual love and respect she gets from Tyler, but she's drawn to how Chris is rougher with her and doesn't hold back on the sexual and kinky aspects as Tyler sometimes has done in the past. So I think both Chris and Tyler are taking some pages out of each others books. That last scene by far was my favorite to write - for a million reasons! I'm so glad that it read as a nice ending to the chapter :)

@Motionless.Rinio
I don't want to say quite yet if there will or won't be a threesome, because no matter how I try to say it I'd kind of have to let some spoilers slip, which I don't want to do, at least for now. I think you will like the next chapter (after the one I just posted in Bella's POV) as it will show PLENTY of TJ.

Thanks as always for both of your kind words and support, you're seriously the best <3

YES YES YES YOU UPDATED WOOOHOOOO

Oh dear bella realy did use the vibrator then, and that was somewhat sexy and hot to read to, a good way to wake you up. XD i want to see a threesome inbetween bella and chris and kuza but i know it is too far away because of how the story flows. So im gonna be patient about it. Also I am so excited to see of TJ punishing bella, maybe he will press the right buttons to make her like him a bit? Like... He gives the best spanks or has a great way to make her cum?maybe one of those. I love the chapter in its entirityand you have outdone tourself

@BlackVeilsinWhite

What a scrumptious chapter! :D

I think all the teasing of Bella turned me mind to Jello, but the end of the chapter was definitely very sweet. Let me see if I can form coherent thoughts . . .

Firstly, I love that Bella ran down the charge on her wand overnight, and that she automatically knew it was Chris. Because he’s the “pain in the ass.” Is it wrong that that made me think extra-dirty things? Probably caused by this line - “My love, you don’t know the definition of pain in the ass.” I growled.

Loved Chris crawling up Bella’s body, talking dirty, and getting stopped with a foot to the crotch. Perhaps, in the future, that will be a nice massaging foot to the crotch? We shall see!

The vibrating panties with multiple remote controls was a good touch! And Tyler is branching out and being a little more deviant, himself. Kind of like he’s taking a cue from Chris, who has, in turn, taken a cue from Tyler; one is getting more kinky, the other is getting softer around the edges.

Speaking of which, quite possible the best thing Chris whispered was about sharing Bella with Tyler. That literally made me forget my own name for a moment! *applauds*

Danny joking about the cream in the coffee nearly made me spit out what I was drinking (hot chocolate). Lol Plus, I loved that Tyler fibbed about not having a remote when he did. See, he’s turning into Chris!

Also shocking was TJ sticking up for Bella. Which smells like a ruse to me, but I’m not exactly sure how. As for real world TJ filling in on Warped, I personally would have preferred that he NOT come back to fill-in, but I seem to be in the minority on that. I just kind of think he's a putz, but whatever. As long as MIW play Warped, it's all good!

And finally, the last scene with Chris and Bella was so sexy and so touching at the very end. Really a perfect cap-off to a perfectly naughty (and delicious!) chapter. I can go to sleep and have sweet Chris dreams now, or so I hope! :)

@WednesdaysCoffin
Yay! I'm glad I could make you happy enough to do the happy dance :)

Besides from the title and the POV...I'm pretty sure you'll like what else this chapter has to hold...

Okay, I waited to see if you would update tonight and HIP HIP HOORAY! :D *does a happy dance* Not only is there an update, but it's called "It Just Feels So Good" and in Chris POV. I feel like I just won the lottery!

@WednesdaysCoffin
I try not to ever tease, haha! Hopefully this chapter makes up for the longer wait time it took to get this chapter out!

I'm glad that you like that Bella is exploring, and opening herself up to a lot of different things. I've tried to keep many twists and turns hidden throughout these 4 books in this little series to keep it interesting and not static as you pointed out - and there are even more to come!

It's funny that you mention the TJ thing, because I just saw it and thought that was kind of crazy to see, but I do have to give him credit, at least he was willing to rejoin them to make Warped work out, and not have to bring on someone who may not know the band as well.

That's completely alright , lord knows I can go crazy too.

I just posted the new chapter, and I really hope you enjoy it :D

@BlackVeilsinWhite
When you say "soon to be uploaded," I say: YOU TEASE! :D lol I could definitely use some reading material, for sure.

I like that Bella is getting tangled into a web, exploring, learning what she likes and what she doesn't like. It makes for interesting reading, and it gives the story a new depth. A static plot isn't the most enjoyable to read, so with a character that is ever-evolving that means the chapters are never predictable or boring. Which is all great for me, as a reader. :)

Oh TJ! Did you see he posted an IG story with him, Rick, Ryan and Vinny hanging out? *shakes her head* Go away, TJ! We don't want you, we want Devicakes!

Sorry, I get a little crazy sometimes . . . :D

@WednesdaysCoffin
Bella definitely is getting herself tangled up in the quiet the web, and that will only be confirmed in the soon to be uploaded next chapter! However tangled it may seem...it really is Bella trying to really push herself to her limits to find out who she really is and what she wants and what she likes. So it's a good crazy web, haha!

You're right about Bella still sassing back - she's finally got to the point where that side of her can start peeking out again without fear of it being taken too seriously. And as far as retaliation goes... someone else might actually want to retaliate for another reason, perhaps they were teased...

TJ and Bella won't be walking off into the sunset together, you're right there! That is one fact that I can absolutely get out there, but I'm sure everyone kind of already guessed that.

@BlackVeilsinWhite
MIWFanfiction.com, you are naughty, naughty! And not in the good way! *Slap*

Yeah, I do not see Bella and TJ ever walking off into the sunset together. But, in a way, that's good: as the dynamics shift, Bella will become more comfortable with some of the guys, but there needs to always be that handful that cause some trouble and ruffle some feathers. Otherwise, there's no real fun there! At this point, I view Bella as mostly being okay with the bulk of the guys, having favorites here and there, but otherwise Tyler and Chris remain the standouts. Possibly Kuza from time to time. I guess we shall see what unfolds. I definitely enjoy when you select some of the more random guys that have only been mentioned in passing and give them a backstory and pull them into the center of the "action."

:D



Oh Bella, what a tangled web you are weaving for yourself! :p

Firstly, with this chapter, I had actually entirely forgotten that Kuza was out of the picture for a while there. Nice to see he has returned and with good info on little Bianca. Glad that someone is checking up!

Nextly, dare I be predictable yet again, but if Chris was in my bedroom handing me a vibrator . . . I would be tossing it off to the side and dragging him to bed. Where I would use him in every way imaginable and probably some new ways, as well.

Returning to being serious, this was a sweet chapter. The pool games were cute and showed that everyone is getting along well. Bella is sassing right back to the boys, which is good to see. However, now that Bella has realized they had her on camera, I expect there to be at least a small backlash from her. I suppose we shall see if I am right soon enough . . . .

A wonderful update, as always! :)