Sinematic - Comments

@smol bean
Thank you for the criticism! I welcome ideas from anyone because everyone sees something different when they read it. I will make some changes when I do my next update! c:

PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE AM SCREAMING. but I do have some slight criticism. I notice a lot of lip biting. you could acknowledge it by like "damn I do that a lot" or just cease the constant lip biting. also too much stuttering. every five seconds like I see some stuttering and not just "s-senpai yes" its like "O-OMG S-SOMEBODY H-HELP M-ME" sorry bb girl I don't want to seem mean but I do want to give you helpful criticism. I love the story and youre a great writer. just a bit repetitive. k love you pls update <3 :p

@Gem_Jar93
Thank you

I'm liking this so far! It has a lot of potential! :D