Deathbeds - Comments

Lol well I'm glad he's okay.

Ik it was too good to hope they started getting close. They gave things to work out and she doesn't trust him. But I hope they can be happy eventually, or at least not let this drag them down

@piercingirisash
Not sure how it happened but the chapter messed up, trying to rush it cause I had to leave work

Wait what? He got dragged into the house? Um okay what's going on here! He better not be hurt, they're finally making progress

It's cool how they're both struggling with these unresolved feelings but don't realize it. I also like that you didn't just push them back together just because they actually had a decent conversation for once. I wonder what happened for him not to show up. This should be good.

@Kellyrages
I know how I want it. Also the things that are going to happen I just don't want it to be a generic story were everything works out because that's not how life works! I want it I be a story of how life really is not just how everyone thinks it is.

You know what I meant?
If anytime of that seemed rude it's not supposed to be just stressed arm xxx

@Kellyrages
I know how I want it. Also the things that are going to happen I just don't want it to be a generic story were everything works out because that's not how life works! I want it I be a story of how life really is not just how everyone thinks it is.

You know what I meant?
If anytime of that seemed rude it's not supposed to be just stressed arm xxx

@Kellyrages
I know how I want it. Also the things that are going to happen I just don't want it to be a generic story were everything works out because that's not how life works! I want it I be a story of how life really is not just how everyone thinks it is.

You know what I meant?
If anytime of that seemed rude it's not supposed to be just stressed arm xxx

@xokateehxo
It needs to be however you feel like writing it! Do you feel like they should start fighting at certain points or do you want them to have super cute moments? That's how I do it! ^^

@Kellyrages
I'm not sure yet...need to know how you guys feel. If you want it to be like normal fan fiction or you want it to be dramatic? With arguments or cute, let me know sweet.

Thank you for reading and commenting it means a lot!

Okay if oli and lacie are so gonna get back together again! And his gf is gonna be like ahh u don't love me like you used too boo :'(

@piercingirisash
Hey sorry I never gave you a mention in the story I didn't know you commented on the chapter before. We will have to see what goes on with them. I like writing this though and I thought I'd show a sweeter side of Oli as well not just the kid who walked out on his girlfriend when she needed him. Thank you for you comment and for reading xo

Lol I really don't think they can be just friends. There's too much history. And just like with Cody, olis girlfriend won't last long with his feelings still there.

Lol I really don't think they can be just friends. There's too much history. And just like with Cody, olis girlfriend won't last long with his feelings still there.

This chapter was awesome. So many emotions and wow he actually talked to her. He can't exactly expect her to not be upset or hurt, but I don't think lacie ever thought he'd be feeling the same way.

@piercingirisash
Thank you!

I will be updating soon :)

-Kay

This is awesome. I love the plot and the story so far. Both of their characters are just tormented over losing the other and neither knows. This is really cool.

@Kellyrages
I know right?!

Thank you for commenting I really appreciate it.
I didn't even realise this was on any other site thought it was only on the BMTH one

They completely deserve her sarcasm what a crappy thing to do! I hope they work it out all right ^^ I like it so far, keep it up!!